In our first draft, there is a lot of shots where the audience can we see that the camera is shaking. We can see this especially when the girl is waking up also when you see the creature behind her. To solve this we need to trim the beginning and ends to parts so, we cannot see the camera shaking. Also, by trimming the shots we are preventing the audience from hearing the camera from when it stops and starts.
Another problem in our opening title is that we an hear the wind an passing cars. This is very distracting and the audience may find it difficult to focus on the opening line. To prevent this we may have to mute the clip but, to make the opening effective, we would add music or sound effects such as dialogue to create a tense atmosphere.
Another thing that we need to improve on, is that in our first draft there is no opening credits. So, at this moment it just looks like clip from a movie, not a opening title. So we will be adding opening credits.
The production has no title so, the audience does not know what the name of the production. Therefore, it is hard to identify the clip to a movie opening.
Another limitation of our opening sequence is that it is too long. The average opening sequence last from a minute to a minute and a half. Our opening is two minutes and eight seconds therefore we need to shorten it by trimming and cutting scenes.
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